On 09/15/2015 09:18 AM, Ryan Brown wrote:
On 09/14/2015 03:22 PM, Aditya Patawari wrote:
Hello,
During the last meeting we talked about the text for gofedora.org. The current text is good but I suggest something on more positive note.
Current text: Fedora Cloud provides a minimal image of Fedora for use in public and private cloud environments. It includes just the bare essentials, so you get enough to run your cloud application -- and nothing more.
Proposed text: Fedora Cloud provides a minimal image of Fedora for use in public and private cloud environments. It includes just the bare essentials making it very light on resources, so you get enough to run your cloud application.
That looks great, there is a small tweak that I'd like though.
Proposed alteration to proposed text: Fedora Cloud provides a minimal image of Fedora for use in public and private cloud environments. It includes just the bare essentials making it very light on resources, *but* you get enough to run your cloud application.
Just replace "so" with "but" in the last clause.
+1