Hi All,
We've had some amazing work done by Susan on the getting started docs and as a result they're already an order of magnitude better than what they were. We'd love feedback to ensure they make sense and flow correctly or if there's missing gaps or bits that need some clarification. Even something as simple as spelling or grammar improvements.
The URL for the latest version is: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/
To report issues you can either raise an issue in the docs issue tracker [1], submit a pull request to the docs git repo [2] or just report the problem to replaying to this email.
I'm really looking forward to the feedback, I excited at the massive improvements we have made in such a short time :-)
Peter
[1] https://pagure.io/fedora-iot/iot-docs/issues [2] https://pagure.io/fedora-iot/iot-docs
On Wed, Feb 20, 2019 at 05:29:41PM +0000, Peter Robinson wrote:
I'm really looking forward to the feedback, I excited at the massive improvements we have made in such a short time :-)
Cool -- I'll try to go through it this weekend.
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/reference-platforms/ https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/getting-started/
Add "that" after "amount of container applications".
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/obtaining-images/
The link "https://iot.fedoraproject.org/" goes to the wrong place: "https://apps.fedoraproject.org/"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/container-support/
Add semicolon after "articles" in: "has a lot of well written documentation and articles you can find a number"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/run-container/
Change "and" to "an" in: "Most repositories contain and image with"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/run-container/
Should there be "you" before "pull" in: will require that pull and run containers in the root namespace.
Change "documentastion" to "documented" in: "are available and well documentation in the podman-run man page."
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/build-docker/
"he FROM line indicates is the starting container,"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/build-docker/
Replace "use" with "is" in: "It use used by the --publish-all option on the podman run command."
Thanks. Pull request #17 has the typos fixed.
Only exception is the iot.fedoraproject.org link. That is the correct link but the site is not yet live. The iot.stg site has incorrect verify links so I did not really want to make that link live either.
-Susan
On Wed, Feb 20, 2019 at 7:10 PM Richard Ryniker ryniker@alum.mit.edu wrote:
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/reference-platforms/ https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/getting-started/
Add "that" after "amount of container applications".
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/obtaining-images/
The link "https://iot.fedoraproject.org/" goes to the wrong place: "https://apps.fedoraproject.org/"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/container-support/
Add semicolon after "articles" in: "has a lot of well written documentation and articles you can find a number"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/run-container/
Change "and" to "an" in: "Most repositories contain and image with"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/run-container/
Should there be "you" before "pull" in: will require that pull and run containers in the root namespace.
Change "documentastion" to "documented" in: "are available and well documentation in the podman-run man page."
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/build-docker/
"he FROM line indicates is the starting container,"
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/iot/build-docker/
Replace "use" with "is" in: "It use used by the --publish-all option on the podman run command."
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